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Third part of my trade with Wet Tot Lilly Pooper!

Part 4: fav.me/d94i032
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A great chapter again. My only criticism would be that Evie's speech level is way too unrealistic. She's described as being one year old, when babies only start speaking  at roughly two years old, with at best two words sentences. Very far from the "Can I get that, too?” shown here.      

Still, an awesome story. ;)